So few memories

We met suddenly
We parted quickly
Leaving me with memories:
Enough to stir my mind
Not enough to fall in love
 ----x---
You are very alive in me,
but why am I starting to forget how you look like?
 ---x---
Why do we love to revise those few memories over and over
and never grow tired of them?
JNU, 2008

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  1. 5 comments:
    toinali said...
    Hey,

    Really nice lines here. I am really impressed specially with the "You are very alive in me....."

    Keep penning:)
    October 22, 2008 12:19:00 PM IST
    Jeremiah said...
    First time to hear such lines from you... must have stirred your heart!
    October 24, 2008 12:15:00 PM IST
    Sao Tunyi said...
    Thanks for the comments. All the postings are quite personal with real stories behind them :-)
    October 24, 2008 1:23:00 PM IST
    B said...
    really liked this....

    A Few lines that came to mind as i read ur post....

    "i say ur alive in me and yet i tend to forget
    I live becoz of the memories
    but ur face to me is dead
    i wonder i question
    i think i sigh
    dead or alive
    a truth or a lie
    my conclusion....
    its just
    u and i..."
    October 29, 2008 4:57:00 PM IST
    B said...
    really liked this....

    A Few lines that came to mind as i read ur post....

    "i say ur alive in me and yet i tend to forget
    I live becoz of the memories
    but ur face to me is dead
    i wonder i question
    i think i sigh
    dead or alive
    a truth or a lie
    my conclusion....
    its just
    u and i..."
    October 29, 2008 4:57:00 PM IST

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